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PrettyInPain (3 stories) (153 posts)
 
11 years ago (2011-08-30)
Haha if that is the case, there wouldn't be any conversation about anything. I didn't mean to hurt your feelings.
herohead (2 stories) (61 posts)
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11 years ago (2011-08-30)
yeah what you said 😊
Its still better that commenting on a comment
PrettyInPain (3 stories) (153 posts)
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11 years ago (2011-08-30)
*Facepalm* Glad to see the immense amount of diversity in these comments. I think it would have been more adequate for everyone else to give Mountaineer good karma instead of repeating him. That's kind of just like saying, "Yeah!" and submitting it. It's not beneficial for the author or anyone else reading the story.
herohead (2 stories) (61 posts)
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11 years ago (2011-08-30)
its a good story, but it sounds like just that, a story! I agree with the others don't write in 3 person.
huendchen (49 posts)
+1
11 years ago (2011-08-30)
Agreed...writing about yourself in the third person is silly and unnecessary. It also makes the story sound more contrived. Write in the first person next time.
Mountaineer (4 stories) (176 posts)
 
11 years ago (2011-08-30)
I have to ask... If the daughter is you then why didn't you write the story in 1st person? Writing about your own experience in 3rd person makes it confusing. It seems almost like you copied this from somewhere and added that last bit to make It your experience. I apologize that's just what it looks like.

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