Paranormal Investigation

Dear Ari,

Thank you for the response. I do not mean to demean or offend any one. That is what I stated in my comments also. I requested the Mods to be more careful as we all respect this site. See the way O/P gave his reply trying to denigrate Rook. It is good that Geetha gave a suitable rebuke.

I agree that the Mods have a lot of responsibility on their shoulders. Still it is only my request to maintain the standard of the site. That is all.

Thanks again Ari. Btw why haven't you commented on my new narrative.

Regards and respects to you.

SDS

Dear sds,
Although I know whatever you stated in your comments was done with good intentions, I cannot but help quote Miracles51031 here from another story's comment section:

"A lot of times it does appear as if we just toss BS stories in here, but we don't. There really are guidelines we have to adhere to and, even though I've requested this rejection category a couple of times, the administrator (s) haven't given us the option to reject a story based on our opinion that it is complete bullsh*t. (I still have my fingers crossed, though.)

And, yes, if y'all are counting sometimes there are only 3 new stories in a days' time. But you really don't see the dozens that are sent back because we just cannot publish them. Sometimes I wonder what the reaction would be if we did just that, though😆"

See they are trying, and they are doing it voluntarily too.It's just not that easy, and I know that you know it too.

Regards

Dear All,

This is what I highlighted in my comments in the story "The Creature That Hides Beneath My Nephews Bed Part 2". I requested the Mods to keep an eye on such stuff.

Please, I have been in this site for a few years now and I value this site and I am privileged to be a member of this site. To tell you frankly, 3 of my submissions were rejected, even though I vouched that they were real. Still I have no regrets and at that point of time, I felt proud that this site is having such standards to ensure publication of experiences.

But these kinds of stories reduce the value and respect the site commands among the readers. So please don't encourage these "Stories" and now-a-days, there are quite a few stories being published of this sort.

As far as this story is concerned, the O/P says that "I am 10 year old" and says he has decided to investigate and said all sorts of tales. Even a kid would say this is fake.

I don't mean to offend anyone but my only concern is that let us maintain some standards.

Regards and respects to everyone.

SDS

I had to go to my lab and invent a BS bag with a built in BS shredder... Because the BS blanket just don't cover this kind.

I could not prevent myself from commenting even after seeing that the last comment was 2 years ago... Am I possessed Mr.Investigator?

hmm...lmao not being an investigator and all? I can tell this story is nothin but pure BS... But oh well whatever floats your boat I guess... No more comment

WTF! My ten year old nephew would tell you this is fake. My cousin and his wife would have committed bloody murder if they found out that their ten year old son spend the night on a road (even without real cars on it) that was surrounded my construction. And believe me, my cousin and his wife believe in give my nephews and niece the independence, space, and freedom to learn but that doesn't mean that they don't have boundaries that they have to follow.

This one is way out there... I think I going to need a piece of that BS blankie... Who has it now?

Also, you made a comment about Rook's cleansing recipe. I would like to say that Rook is one of expects here but that doesn't mean he knows everything but at the same time he is always ready to give valuable information to us; one of them being the cleansing recipe. That cleansing recipe is a generalization and it's up to the original poster to take it and adapt it according to there believes. For example, if I were to use the recipe and I had to say the prayers, I would say prayers from the Hindu holy books, others might use prayers from the Bible, or the Quran. All I'm saying is that it will depend on a person's faith and believes and I don't you have the right to put someone like Rook down when you wrote a crap load of BS.

Also, you say you are an experienced paranormal investigator but you have two many holes in your story. Something that comes with experience is professionalism. As I said, your story has many holes, with those holes, people on this site are going to have a lot of questions. As the author, if you are going to post your story here, I think it's only right that you answer to the questions we have, so that we have a better idea to help you out, if needed.

Hey, hey, hey. Wait just a minute, slow your jelly roll! No bagging on the gamers or D&D for this fool's lunacy! I resemble that remark. 😠 😆 ❤

I've got to agree with everyone else. This is NOT a true story. Come on! Tift County is only about 9 sq miles and has a population of roughly 18,000. That's the CURRENT population. It was only about 15, 000 in 2002. You're telling me that a small town's newspaper wouldn't have a front page article on an accident such as that? Red flags! Sirens! Bells! Whistles! I'm not buying that!

I live in a city with a current population of 200, 000 and roughly 68 sq miles. While a story like that might not (and I do say MIGHT) make front page, it would definitely have been in the newspaper.

I too was quite independent at 10 years old. However, my parents would have been extremely upset had I stayed out (without them or another adult) past 9pm. And that would be in the summer when it doesn't get dark until about that time. My grandmother took me to visit the mayor at roughly that age. I can guarantee you that he would NOT have let me investigate one of the many side streets with zero traffic a that time of night; especially without an adult. And this was back in 1981 when neighborhoods were considered safer than what they are now!

Bottom line. No. I'm not buying that this story is even based on fact; much less IS fact.

SirAader, how wrong could you have got the date? You are only 19 now! Was it 9 years ago or was it one year ago when you became an adult? A commissioner would only negotiate and give his permission to adults, if at all. You claim to have been independent so you didn't ask your parents permission but you asked the commissioner? Where is the logic?

And what sort of investigator gets dates wrong in a case file? Why would an investigator, who appears to know it all, want understanding and from people whom you seem to think know nothing about the paranormal?

BTW don't worry about your writing. As an English teacher, I can tell you that it is no more formal than most people's on this site.

it is according to my opinion that y'all believe what y'all want so I will not convince you otherwise. It ain't my place nor y'all s to judge I do stand by it as a true account as it happens I may have possibly read the wrong date. Now I came to this site hoping for genuine understanding not Trolls 😢

This is where we let our stupidity show, and decided to use a Ouija board we got 2 spirits named "Jack" and "Jane" it was a very creepy feeling. Turns out the two "spirits" are actually a inccubus and succubus who decided to toy with us. We ended up geting that road blessed.----- Father Merrin did an exorcism and Ash took care of the ones that tried to sneak by with his BOOOOOOM STICKKKKKK

SirAader From a parent's point of view only and not as an expert on the paranormal: Even an independent 10 year old wouldn't get permission from a responsible commissioner, a person of authority and highly respected, to sit on a road in the middle of the night to "investigate" it, traffic or no. Ever heard of stranger danger? If you were a parent, would you allow your 10 year old to do such a thing? Next you'll be saying that the commissioner didn't even call your parents! The town would have had him strung up. Nor would a responsible parent allow such a thing, no matter how "independent" the 10 year old is/was.

Sorry, you didn't say, were Jack and Jill the same couple from the prom?

Having said that, I believe that you believe your own story. Toddlers have pretty wild imaginations. They make up a story and that story grows in dimension each time they tell it. If they continue telling it, the story eventually becomes real in their own minds.

sirAader
How can I put this in a polite way without annoying you or making you "see red" over the comment?
BLANKEY ALERT!
Hmmm works for me
And as for telling others to "get over it" when they dis~believe your "story" I am betting most of them wish they had gotten over it, by missing it out altogether.

I'd brush up on my story telling abilities a wee bit more before heading off into the land of plagiarism there laddy.

SirKnight,
keep your dayjob... The paranormal realm may be a bit too much for you.

I'm sorry for being so hard on you, but that doesn't make any sense at all!

Seriously, did you actually think that anyone would buy it? I'm traumatized... By the lack of common sense you showed by submitting this story.

Alright so there was 2 cars that crashed, that would mean more than 2 people died, the couple in the car driving home from their prom night, and who ever else was in the other ghost car. How did you have the road blessed, did a priest drive up and down the road praying, throwing holy water out the window? Did this story make it to the "Tifton Times"? I surely would have read about it. I commend you SirAader for keeping our roads safe at night, investigating ghost activity and finding a solution to the problems that face ordinary folk in society... Bravo for SirAada

Did thou concocteth a potion of truth before consulting with the Daemons? Then thou wouldst not have fallen for their travesty. And thou shouldst have then summoned a level 7 spectral Minotaur to drive the evil Daemons away, not sprinkled the road with a potion of cleansing! I'm laughing too hard to continue! 😆 😆 😆 I had a person at my summer camp this year who did nothing but play D&D, and he'd always find some way to bring the game into the conversation. You sound like him.

--respectfully, Mountaineer

Saturday Sep 24 2011

Time: 2314

Place: YGS

STORY TITLED: Paranormal Investigation

Facts (as established in the STORY):

In 1996 a 2 year old overhears his older brother talking about a 'ghost story' concerning the road in front of his house. 8 years later, the now 10 year old organizes a ghost investigation with the town commissioner who give permission for this 10 year old and his friends to conduct said investigation.

10 year old Investigators conduct Ouija board session and contact an Incubi and Succubi named Jack and Jane. After contact the investigators have entire road blessed.

Facts listed so that those crafting the BS Blankie know just how big it needs to be... Sorry I am in no way, shape or form 'buying' this one.

Apologies to the O/P...you may be a true Investigator... But this particular STORY I feel is just that a STORY.

Respectfully,

Rook

...and I want to know why succubi and incubi would be considered "minimum threat"? This story has too much of a gamer vibe to it for my taste. 😕 sorry.

I agree with nysa on this one! The tiered organization... Just sad. This isn't a D&D game, here. Case file Alpha 0111? The ghost cars crash, and a succubus and incubus were driving them? (eyeroll,ok) I'm sorry, but I have so many issues with this story. I am SO trying to be polite and respectful, but...

That did not make sense. Two kids killed on prom night, an incubus & sucubus, phantom cars investigated by 10 year old paranormal investigators? No one part of the story seemed connected to any other part of the story.

Just out of curiosity who created the tiered organization to rate the danger of the entities?

Yeah, that's pretty ambitious for a 10 year old. How did you convince adults to get the road blessed?

So in 2002 you investigated a haunted road. At midnight. When were you 10? Do you mean at 20? 'Cause at 10, I don't know if your parents would let you out of the house past ten o'clock at night. Unless you sneek out?